Apology Time...

Okay, I have to apologize for that last chapter. I just got around to reading out loud with my Home Focus Group, and I know it's just a draft, but... Man, it's bad. Just... bad. Several plot holes, stiff writing... I apologize to anyone who had to read that. Hopefully Chapter 7 (up later this week) is better... Brief aside: I know there are occasionally some random-seeming words here and there, and those really are typos, its just that they also happen to be legitimate words, and the computer doesn't catch them. But hey, that's what the 5th draft is for:) So anyway, sorry all...